This one really got to me! I can hardly stop looking at it. It looks like she thinks really hard about something, like she can't stop thinking about it, like she's trapped in her own mind.
I like the dust, it really makes me wanna clean my screen, but it won't go away. I often feel that way when I get stressed or anxious, like there's dust everywhere and I can't get it away no matter what. If the dust wasn't there, this portrait would look too clean, and somehow it would be darker in a way that would make it less dark. Does that make sense?
Under her black hair/coat (?), there's a dark, dark blue clothing, which is almost black, but you still see it because there's so few colors in the picture. I love that detail. I also like that there is now visible make-up in her face.
I can't think of any thing that I would like to see done better this time, I find this portrait perfect from my view. Thank you for sharing.